Comments : Speechless

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    What is this I see? A love poem? *YES YES YES*

    Powerful write! Within this write I see a women's heart melting... like butter! I adore small poems that scream at me, and this one did just that and more... love it!

    • 11 years ago

      by MyHalozChokinMe

      Thank you Maple. I think I even put it in the "right" category this time. :P

  • 11 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    I agree very powerful short but sweet

    Real breath of fresh air :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Now then.......miss 'i dont do love poems'

    That...is a love poem, not only that but it is an awesome love poem!!!

    The whole thing is like a poetic waterfall of imagery and flow, opened right up and just ooooozing with emotion!

    As always an awesome awesome write!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Omg! woooo. so in love with this, it is an amazingly worded love poem, so short and says exactly what you wanted to say and give the idea of. Well done for posting it in the love category, bet that hurt lol.

  • 11 years ago

    by MyHalozChokinMe

    Lol Baby R. I think you may have figured me out.