Comments : Pumpkin

  • 5 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I really want to comment on this, but I know that my thoughts would be confused and I'd just ramble on about nothing of much value so I'll keep it simple
    and just say that I love how you wrote this, it was touching and beautiful, and once again, I just love everything about it, the flow, the emotion, the love, the warmth, the dedication, just everything.

    And now I have rambled, I'll just send you a hug and say, I love it and I love u
    x

  • 5 years ago

    by Hellon

    Oh...how special is this...let me just get this little annoying thing out of the way first up...

    site to see.
    ^^^^

    I'm not sure about the phonetics here but....I would have thought sight?

    I love how you start off with saying your dad had his little pumpkin and how she was much loved....my little granddaughter's nick name is sprout so...relating already but...what I loved most was the second half of this verse...you have become older and...maybe not the ripe pumpkin anymore...a little doubt about whether you have lived up to your fathers expectations but...you are still very much your own woman....I'm pretty sure he's very proud of his pumpkin!

  • 5 years ago

    by Meme

    This is so special Andrea, just so special!

    The openning verse was so capturing, couldnt get anymore poetic than that.

    The way you went to describe the different phases of your life was phenomenal. I loved the metaphors, the worsings, the emotions behind it all!

    You shine through everyoiece you write.

    God bless you.

  • 5 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is by far one of your best poems, it is so beautiful and tingling to read. It really is a description of a beautiful relationship between a father and daughter and how special it is.

    I liked how it told the story very briefly about the relationship from start until now and you gave a bit about yourself in this aswell and where you are at right now and what you are living for.

    This was so touching and I really enjoyed reading this.

  • 5 years ago

    by Wild flower

    This is really touching, I love this poem. Another amazing piece by you:)

  • 5 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Beautiful maple
    Is it Woodstock tho as in the festival ???

    Love it girl xx

  • 5 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Oh my gosh loveeeeeeee this metaphor! Can't even comment on it really. So cute. Pumpkin is the cutest nickname to me. I don't call too many people pumpkin. Just someone I adore. Like a child. Or a friend....I just love it.

    So so cute..sigh*...