Damn this wasn`t beautiful as you said, it was freaking fabulous! Loved this one as insane and dark as it were it were, so real and powerful, yet just so amazing. Great job something one can really feel while reading and perfect ending ^^.
Thank you mate. This was a crazy idea that came up out of nowhere and a chance to experiment with the 2x2 setup.
3 years ago
What an amazing crazy idea.This poem was really deep.It did cut deep in my heart.
All the lines are just fantastic and I love how you start almost each line with another.It adds a lot of________(I dont know what to say) something good in the poem.The word another tells us that we need to pay attention to this another.
Overall very crazily well written.