OMG!! I had tears in my eyes at the end of it! I could feel the sadness and the pain painting every word. It sends a great message to society showing its ignorance towards these kinds of situation. kids abuse is the most heartbreaking and the worst thing that could ever happen and we must stop it! we must find shelter for these kids and prevent them from ending a life God has given them...I truly can't find the right words to comment on this piece because it's simply breathtaking! well done! 5/5
Saffie, I don't think you will ever be completely "finished" ...because the friendship didn't finish and you never got a proper goodbye...so it's going to be hard to be able to put an ending to something that truly didn't end. Does that make sense? The friendship and love for her is still alive in your heart, she may be gone... but she still lives in you.
Breaking apart this piece and analyzing it would be too disrespectful. It's perfect, I'll tell you that...and a wonderful tribute to her. I know she's proud of you and everything that you have accomplished.
You have truly touched me, and I'm sure you will many others.
By reading this piece, it brings back so many
sad and awful memories. When does the abuse ever stop? Often the victim is crying out for help in so many different ways and others have chosen to ignore it or being in complete denial. Either way it is called ignorance. The suicide rate is on the rise due to abuse. If only others would take the time and see and hear what is going on.
I can feel your pain and sorrow and you were never given a fair chance to say good-bye. Certain chaptersin life will never be completely closed. She will cherish you for ever