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This is a winning material, IMO... I wish I had votes left. But you literally left me speechless.
The subtle rhyming between paradise and perhaps has this beat of magic that I cannot explain.
I wonder why you said 'with no clothes'... instead of 'nude'... but that is perfect! I think it's much better that you said 'with no clothes'...