Comments : A Ballad of Away's

  • 5 years ago

    by Decayed

    Geez, MaryAnne.

    This is a winning material, IMO... I wish I had votes left. But you literally left me speechless.

    The subtle rhyming between paradise and perhaps has this beat of magic that I cannot explain.

    I wonder why you said 'with no clothes'... instead of 'nude'... but that is perfect! I think it's much better that you said 'with no clothes'...