Hey There!

by Do You Believe   Nov 18, 2012


Can you promise me a lifetime of love and trust
Can we live to ascend in the morning lust
The prison that holds us at the times we talk
The messages sent back in forth in the blue inbox
I'm surprise we haven't got near to fading away
Your beauty and your smile that stands all day
The untouchable reasons and and the words i'm consuming
I really wrote this poem to see how you were doing.

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  • 10 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is a sweet little poem. I like it a lot. Its simple but it has good intention and a lot of heart. Great job...

  • 11 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Sweetie there were errors INCLUDING in the name! lol sorry it's supposed to be "there" and in some words didn't fit best in the poem BUT overall it's a VERY sweet poem! :) i hope my fiance makes poetry like this for me one day! :) well he does poetry just not for me lol

    Queen Ash