Your tone is not only sad but angry too. Love this poem, I feel it came straight from your heart.
Good job Sonia:)

I read it twice,
second time i read this bottom to top i think thats also nice, but i don't know exactly.
but realy nice written sonia..

Nice poem. I really like the first few lines. Well actually, I liked all of them but the beginning was, lets say, my favorite if we can call it that way. Good, really good.

I can sense a lot of frustration in this poem. It described the flaws of this relationship and how they hurt you and let you down. I liked the interpreatation of Santa and the child, with the gift as the main point of it.

Nice job x

Sonia baby, has my attitude rubbed off on you? LOL! I LOVE THIS! YES! Poetry that is "in your face" is my kind of writing! I absolutely adore it when there is an attitude, a tone, in this poem that makes the readers automatically take your side without hearing the other...

Your ending was superb! Seriously, amazing question, amazing answer...Loved everything about this dang poem girl!!

Sadddd!!!!A heart touching piece!Great!