Heyy I really liked yr poem. Keep writing I'd like to read more of yr stuff. I gave you a 5. :-D

Love
*Casondra

hey another hayley here lol. Brilliant poem again xxx

Im glad that you liked this everyone.. its one of my fav poems that I wrote.. and one of the first ones that i put on the website.. plz keep comenting on all of my poems if u liked them or if u have some tips for me..thanx again

This is truly a very good poem! I love it and I love the contrasts and what it is saying. Keep up the good work!
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very nice poem..........very well written.......very powerful

plerase havea read at mmy featured poem and one of my latest ones too

thankyou