A Brush of Friendship

Shant'e, you are the sweetest. Anyone would be very lucky to have you as a dear friend! I mean, just look at this poem... it just radiates true friendship.

I love the creativity with the paint - how pastel colors is a form of weakness...that you would only use bold, bright colors for your brightest friends.

I'm beginning to love each piece you post, keep it up, girl! :)

I love this because i get the vision of a healing love and compassion shared. The point of view is from someone who geniunely cares and i get that. I think it comes across great with readers because actually caring for people is easy but truly the art of healing is a talent only for love.
*Don't push me and my feelings aside
by building walls that are too high.
No, I can't climb over and your pride
has block the way in.*
This was my favorite stanza cause i believe its typical for people to block people out when their hurt than actually letting them in. If only personally people could realize that letting people in helps better.
Overall the sacrafice for the other person and the commitment to heal is what really amazed me.

Don't push me and my feelings aside
by building walls that are too high.
No, I can't climb over and your pride
has block the way in.
^ that stanza i really loved since it is everyone that i have ever met and they were fallen but now they aren't and i really love how you portrayed this poem it was very well made!!! those friends of yours must be VERY proud! :) 5/5

Queen Ash

A really nice poem directed to your friends who must be proud of you. I loved the idea of using paint brush, brightening and boldness colors to describe your feelings ... this is totally unique way. My only critique is related to grammar, the word "describes" in the last two stanzas should read "describe" without "s".
I really loved your work. Thank you for sharing that with us, 5/5.

I really did like it