This is indeed one unique piece. Very meaningful and the truth well spoken.
Excellent write, enjoyed reading, add to my fav
4 years ago
You have an amazing narrative skill. You took me to a scene where I am watching I am guessing a kid who is observing the Bus drivers. It seems the kid is day and night in there because Jen takes them with her. So perhaps Jen is the Kid's sister. Or perhaps, since the kid is hiding it could be that Jen does not know that they are there. So the kid hides because he likes observing the bus drivers and wishes to know the answers to the questions at the beginning of this write.
But towards the end, I am guessing the kid realizes the bus drivers gestures are given as familiary? Perhaps our of courtesy? And wonders what will happen if a novice driver is hired and forgets to gesture? That will answer I am guessing the beginning questions to him.