Comments : Oppression

  • 5 years ago

    by Xanthe

    The first stanza's exquisitely written. I love it.
    This piece is dripping with passion, power. Enjoyed it.

  • 5 years ago

    by Britt

    The first stanza just breaks my heart. I seriously can't believe people had to drink from different fountains. It's just not something I can begin to understand, it seems so ridiculous. You hit it spot on when you said you fear what you can't control, that's all it is. Different doesn't mean bad, and I'm guilty of that sometimes. Definitely a piece to make you think!