A free spirit

Such a lovely write, clear feelings behind this and you capture the true beauty and strength in an elegant way. This poem is clearly very heartfelt, whoever it was written for must have adored it :)

Its pretty. Thoughtful and written so lovingly. Whoever it is about truly is a beautiful muse. So smooth so simple so perfect.

5.5

With love,
Lovenut

Precious write. Simple as that.

I'm positive she adored it.

Your mother will love this dedication..........only joking I know it's not for your mother, couldn't resist it.
A simplistic poem that is stripped back to just a heartfelt message, no pretence, no confusing analogies just plain and simple gratitude to a person you obviously have a lot of respect for.
great write Tony

Wow! Such a beautiful dedication to your mother... I'm sure she will love this poem!

I loved everything about this poem... so beautiful and touching.

I just noticed in this stanza:

"though the darkness into magical
beams."

^^ I think you meant 'through' here?

This poem is simple yet so beautiful! <3 Great job!