Comments : What Is love again?

  • 4 years ago

    by Mimed Lovette

    Hi, i must say that i love a good and sweet love poem and this really hit the spot! I loved the rhyme scheme applied here though it would have flowed better if minor tweaks would be made to the second verse, last sentence so that the last word could rhyme with 'complements'.

    But generally, i liked the inspiration this poem drew upon. I could not have penned such feelings down as brilliantly as how you did. It felt raw and at the same time, heart-breaking. Overall, good write! :)