Comments : My Lord

  • 4 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    Wow this has a lot of great wording in such a small space. I love the glass and stars metaphor. Your imagery with it is amazing. On the starry night glass does glitter. I love the simple way you talk about dying.And you pray to any gGod to save your soul that was beautiful. The end line was amazing as well because you are saying you regret your life. Outstanding! 5