I adore how you mix these dances with nature and love together. It is a very rare thing to see in poetry.

The imagery is clear because you pick such descriptive words and I can imagine the dance picking up pace as the flow of the poem becomes faster.

Another great job Hannah, seems like you done well on the challenge!

As Saffie says, the imagery conjured here is marvellous because of the quantity and quality of descriptive language.

a hypersonic cyclone
rests on the gulf
of casualness,
smirking at a
potpourri afterthought.

^^

Love this, by the way.

Take care, Hannah

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