Comments : Warped and twisted

  • 5 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Wow... that was breathtaking. Wonderful flow and amazing rhyming. Fantastic write.

  • 5 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Whoa, heartrending for sure. I agree that the rhyme and flow are spot on, very well done. Though I also enjoy the style and strength of your voice throughout the piece. For a first write on the site it's an excellent entry. Wonderful job, stunning piece.

    P.s. the oozing emotion was by far the best part to me; made me feel like I was in your shoes.

  • 5 years ago

    by beautifullybroken

    This is very well written savannah. nice job on the emotion it's heartbreaking, but I feel it.

  • 5 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Love the rhyme the flow and the message inside this poem. Very powerful piece.

    To many whens, and to many why's

    Very awesome :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    This is so heart breaking.

  • 5 years ago

    by kalaurie

    This is amazingly heart breaking and emotionally breath taking.

  • 5 years ago

    by Vermilion

    Oh my god... how is it even possible that a poem can be this good??! I would rate higher than 5 if I could!