I really did think this was good! I love the two parts of the speaking with you and another person's dialogue.

Part one- its really sad how you feel like this about yourself. But for t he poem itself the imagery is wonderful and the wording is great in each stanza. You are beautiful though dont forget that hon. I love everything about the first part because it leads up to the second part.

Second part. You are not ugly at all but I know how you feel here. When depression and abuse takes over its hard to feel happy. You describe your sadness so well and I love the way you worded everything here. Its always great to get your feelings out. You did that so well. Remember dont like people get you down. 5

I hope your depression goes away soon
trust me it will all teenagers have issues with
some part of their bodies people think they are to fat/to thin/ugly/to beautiful/its life.
Your not ugly your not fat your you...YOU
unique and special so dont be hurt by the stupid comments of others live your life for you not others and be happy within your own skin..

Nice use of words. But wrong manner of presenting yourself. It's nature that made you the way you are; bear it in mind that you can't redirect the wind. So it better you start admiring yourself. You are unique for all I care!

Nice use of words. But wrong manner of presenting yourself. It's nature that made you the way you are; bear it in mind that you can't redirect the wind. So it better you start admiring yourself. You are unique for all I care!

A beautiful and brutal poem which really struck home with me. You really have a talent for writing without "filters". I love it!

You r you, unique and be proud of that !

A beautiful poem enjoyed it immensely, you have real talent !

Wow is all I can say. You have talent don't let anyone stop you! #Pow looking forward to reading more of your work. Well done!