This type of style is not exactly what I am used to reading, so I'm not sure how to comment.
But I don't think you lost "it," rather you still got "it"
I mean this piece is filled with imagery and at the same it takes me into some type of journey...
The first stanza, that one just popped out to me. Though, I 'm unsure as what this line may mean : and lies filled in the scars with stars for those fast fools" I guess I sort have an idea but I can't quiet put it into words.
Overall, it captures my attention. I think I get the main part of the poem, specially because of the ending and the title, but I'll hold back in my comment until I'm sure of what I want to say or I fear my imagination will start kicking in and I may go totally off.