I like how you started this poem off by describing what love is like and the feelings that it incites in you. The questions you asked regarding the wedding rings can only make me think, how insignificant the value of it is when two people truly love one another. The ring is only a material thing that makes your vows known to the public, but the love is what makes it everlasting.
4 years ago
by Blue Jasmine
This poem is nicely written. It clearly describes what love is like and what love is really all about. As I read it myself, it made me think just how precious love can be...truly a STRONG emotion. The ring is just the symbol of a sacred love. A beautifully written poem indeed. Well done!!