Good, clean expressive realism of a Sun Shower. Thanks.
4 years ago
The imagery really is beautiful here. When I think of thesun I think of joy in the heart and everyones life. I love the fire from the sky line. The sun really is fire and the fire or rays make the light in our life. I also like how you say it fills you pur bliss. In my mind it is saying that you were hhaving a bad day and when the sun came out the light lifted your mood. The gray veil has lifted I love it. Colours really brighten up life. I love how you used it though. The sky does have many colours and life all around us is beautiful. The ending made me smile because everyone has pure joy now or at least in your poem. I love the feeling you bring. 5/5