Comments : Tidal Wave of Resentments Recourse

  • 5 years ago

    by TotaMariee

    'I feel it in everything around me in every way,
    Even the colors of my world have begun to fade back to grey'

    PERFECT.

  • 5 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    "The outcome of numerous fights resulting in your emotional fade," great descriptional text but still holding relevance-

    Forced rhyming took away from the write, but fantastic work.