Comments : Safely

  • 5 years ago

    by Curtis Young

    Take my hand in the night,
    Now you don't have to fight.
    Come with me,
    And just leave the other world be.

    love it

  • 5 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    This is in my opinion your best sad poem. This is a great dedication to show how much you care for this person. The details are very dad though but well written. I think sadly a lot of people can relate to this. It's great you put this on here as it shows again this person you care and all you want them to do is be safe. I love each stanza because they connect so well with each other. I believe each line tells their story and there at the end there is hope. You want to bring bliss this person and their life. Great poem at it shows you care and holds so much sadness and hope.

  • 5 years ago

    by Karis Marie Byrd

    A different point of view for abuse. I like it. You give security for the people who have been in such a situation. Great job and keep on writing.

  • 5 years ago

    by Black pearl