Comments : Drenched in confliction

  • 10 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Jesus, girl.
    This is amazing! It seems so different than some of your other pieces.

    I really love the use of cold fronts, warm fronts; and the exclamation of arise! for the thunder and also on the third stanza with the right arm, left arm... temptation disperse! Using those two different sides and then using the exclamation gave it so much drama and emphasis! I love it.

    The whole meaning of this poem is the ending... having that angel on one side and the devil on the other trying to tempt you. Completely confused and trying to figure out what's right and what's wrong and ultimately where you belong.

    Great job!