Wow simply amazing great work

Simply excellant

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Wow very moving nicely done :)

Really well written

A nice dark piece of work. well thought out and written

Wow, that is so powerful and sad, it really got m thinking, wonderful description and sense of wording and expression, the story was told excellently!

Oh my god..... What an emotional poem.
I love this poem so much...
You caught my attention in the very first line of your poem..... "Standing on the edge
Between the living and the dead"..
What a powerful line......
I felt that you wanted to indicate that you were standing on the edge of living a lively life ahead of you and the dead world you live in right now.....

I specially loved these lines.......
What lies ahead
Is the certainty and promise
Of the nothingness and emptiness

Very well written.... Keep writing and thank you for sharing..

Interesting

THIS IS VERY NICE. KUDOS DEAR!