Comments : Love,like the rain

  • 4 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Prati dear,

    This is an uplifting message, you wrote down here, and so eloquently worded:)

    We are stronger than we know, so many of us have to lose loved ones over and over again and fear the sun will never return again, and always does:)

    precious to treasure
    abysmal to measure
    memories to cherish
    hard to perish


    My favorite stanza, strong opening and shows good insight in human emotions.

    Well done, little sister!

    Hugs from Ingrid

    • 4 years ago

      by LittleMermaid

      Thanks a lot sis ,for the precious means lot to me :)

  • 4 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    Very beautiful, i love how you described love in so many and beautiful ways