Something more

by Aubrey   Dec 24, 2013


My hole life
I wanted to be someone important
someone when dead
everyone would remember
But I never felt like that person
And now that I'm around u
I feel like I don't need to be that way anymore
Because with u
I feel like I'm something more

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  • 10 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    I just love how you make this simple and straight forward to what you are trying to say. I feel their is need for some commas here and there to make it flow even better....

  • 10 years ago

    by Sherwin Talapian

    Great piece . :)