Comments : Beautiful Stranger

  • 4 years ago

    by redxiii

    I don't see how anyone could be sad around you. I'm happy to see you wrote something. :) keep up the good work and smile for me. :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Kelwin lost in thought

    I love it. It's very very good.

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Good heavens, Ren, this reduced me to tears.....almost, lol.
    Truly, this had me captivated throughout and the rhyming and flow are a pleasure to read.

    Great write - all the best,
    Ben

    • 2 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you very much Ben! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate your kind words!
      Take care! :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Em

    Ren, this is so delicately written yet so sad and full of emotion. Though long you kept the rhythm, flow and beat throughout. I like the centre structure to, it gives it a better feel.

    We are all but beautiful strangers in our own rights.

    Em

    • 2 years ago

      by Ren

      Hey Em!
      Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I appreciate it! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

      Take care :)

  • 1 year ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I love this, we're I able to nominate this I most certainly would.

    Fantastically conveyed emotion and thought

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much! I really appreciate it :)

  • 1 year ago

    by ddavidd

    the mood of this piece goes up and down and changes like a symphony.
    well penned my dear friend.

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much Frank!! I appreciate it :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Lyical Madness

    what a wonderfully written piece, very emotive & expressive x

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much! :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Tony

    Couldn't help but think of my grandfather at his end... beautiful message. I think you have a talent for making words that aren't supposed to rhyme, sound like they do. It eats at my OCD and makes me jealous at the same time : D

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Oh wow, sorry about that lol...well thank you so much! I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Ren, I really liked this a lot. I was totally engrossed the entire read. Really nice rhyming through out. Wasn't sure if this stranger was there to harm you or just make an appearance in your life. Well done!

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much Brenda!! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Alec

    Wow. There is a lot of emotion here! It flows well which you don't see often with rhyming poems... none of it seems forced, or interferes with your story. Love it!

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much!! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment :)

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    Dear Cowgirl, what a beautiful, excellent piece! First of all, the title is brilliant, and the message of the poem kills me. The flow is absolutely beautiful and I must agree with Alec, not forced, but all the emotions just seem to tumble out with the unfolding of every line! Agree with Frank totally, this is like reading a symphony! Wow may fall short to describe how amazed I am of your talent. I am not only impressed, I appreciate you even more. Added to favorites!

    Much love, Lady Mel Liz.

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Dearest Lady Mel Liz, you are too kind!! I truly appreciate your beautiful words!! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece, and I appreciate you so much!! Thanks again! Much love to you!! :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Hope

    I feel the wonderment of this poem for the stranger from afar, great piece. Love it!

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much!! :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Fabulous, a wonderful piece, rhyming and imagery couldn't be better. Great job x

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so very much!! :)