Comments : Anxiety and the Blurred out Barriers

  • 4 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    Loved this awesome write here

  • 4 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Here I see sadness and it could be turned into a nightmare you are having everynight but it's reality. When you have been truly hurt any image is bad very bad. All your thoughts turn dark. I loved the wording in this one as well because this character has had a tough life and I can see this based on reality. I loved the razor compared to the kiss of death, pain does feel that way all the time. Emotional pain mostly. It's very difficult for people to understand how another is really feeling. The way you describe it though I think is perfect. You go into honest details here. As I said they could be a nightmare coming true everyday so that's why I loved the minutes turned into hours stanza, Because one day can down spirial a life. The ending is great as well. We never want to face our fears but when we do... it seems impossible. Great write