This is a very dark poem it's like you are letting the readers take a look after different shades of you everytime they read your poems

This is very sad and dark. But the imagery you used is great. The wording is simple but it leaves you thinking. The story seems to be throughout the whole night and when you wake up and no one hears you scream it's a terrible feeling. You wrote this well 5/5

I like the way you write, specially this one. You've used such simple words for a dark poem, in some ways its difficult, and I must say, you did a fine job.

I love this! So perfect! <3 5/5 :D