Comments : Stress

  • 3 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I like how each stanza is only two lines so it gets to the point but it isn't so short that this means the piece has no strength or substance. This is a well written piece and if you'd like a better home for it, it would fit in the life category pretty well. Anyway, like I said, I like this piece. Nice job.

    • 3 years ago

      by Court

      I thought that, but couldn't figure out which sub category... thank you very much for the feedback, though. :)