Comments : Too Little, Too Late

  • 1 year ago

    by Cindy

    Luanne
    This is such a sad heartbreaking piece. The words you have used make the reader feel your emotions.

    You-Me "Without an - Us",
    a thing once so uniquely comparable
    to drawing a square without lines
    or living forever

    To lose this feeling makes you feel so all alone.
    After feeling like one for so long.

    Nothing existed anymore
    between the sun and the rain

    I loved these lines it leaves the reader feeling empty.
    Wonderful write.
    Take care Cindy

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A wonderfully written piece, penned with such melancholy. Well done and all the best
    Ben