Comments : Alternatate ending of realization ...

  • 3 years ago

    by Marvellous

    When it's over, result is called. There's always a place called Forward.

  • 3 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    Aw... this is such a sad piece....
    My heart was aching as i read the poem..
    Recalling the memories without feeling the sadness and pain knowing you havent moved on is never an easy thing to do
    Well written 5

  • 3 years ago

    by Darclyfe

    I feel the pain. Losing someone dear to you is the worst. Like a piece of you was torn out and you feel like you can never get that back. I wish and pray that our fallen find embrace under God.

    -Darclyfe-
    5/5