Comments : Natures Concert (Pantoum)

  • 3 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Such a beautiful composition on nature.
    Loved the title .Pantoum,a new way of expressing,some learning .Thank you for the details .

  • 3 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Felt the beauty and timelessness of Nature when I read your poem. Saw a sunlit meadow and heard birds chirping in my mind. Beautiful vibe here.

  • 3 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow, another form I have been blind to! Thank you for pointing this out, I shall have to be brave and attempt it myself soon!

    I enjoyed this poem, the content left me feeling quite relaxed and calm, and say me inside a comfortable surrounding of gentle nature! The idea of nature having a concert is just a genius idea! What a wonderful thought and straight away lets that imagery really open up to ideas, hearing the birds, the breeze, the waters, the little sounds that we don't even notice or acknowledge. What a beautiful poem!

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a beautifully vivid and well written piece you've crafted here, Meena, with a lovely flow. I would like to pick a stanza but they really are all beautifully penned and cleverly done!
    All the very best,
    Ben