Normally, I'm not a fan of love poems but this one is beautiful hon. I think here you wanted to capture that perfect moment with the one you love, even though the world is falling apart because for that one moment nothing else matters and you do feel at peace with yourself. Whether you are feeling happy for sad you just want to know that this person will be there for you no matter what. The imagery you create is beautiful and it leaves you feeling emotional heh. The ending is my favorite part because it is as I said. You want to know the person will be there for you and be there forever. Cute poem hon. Well written.