Comments : Weight in My Eyes

  • 3 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Wow !!!! How beautifully you express your grief of missing your loved one at times when you feel really hurt.....
    You have amazing writing skills Meena.
    Loved the flow.....
    Take care .

  • 3 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Yes meena ji Agree with alka ji you have amazing writing skills

  • 3 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Oh Meena.....SIGH.......This write is so beautiful and tragic at once. I always read poetry aloud and always two or three times and .....oh god you can write!

    i'm pretty sure that I don't need to say the flow, word choice, emotion were perfectly balanced and for me, simply breathtaking.

    it is such a relatable write and so very heartfelt I genuinly thankyou for sharing.


  • 3 years ago

    by Mayday

    Awwwhh! *Hand-to-heart-Gesture* This is so beautiful and sad! I wonder if you're speaking of one of your children? That is tough :(

    You have seen me in my worst
    and cheered on till I became the best,
    picked me up from the deepest dirt
    with a precious heart I've savored from birth,

    So precious c:
    A really heart-felt read.

  • 3 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    You have executed this write very justly. This is brilliant, must have been written by the profundity of your heart. This poem has driven me towards the great pain that you had suffered. I sense great grief in all lines.... Also I sense that the one who cared you a lot has departed. Heart-touching write. 5/5

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is a beautifully written poem and immensely powerful.

  • 10 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    A very powerful piece straight from the heart