Comments : Notebooks

  • 3 years ago

    by ah satan 666


  • 3 years ago

    by Rob

    Intense! Good Ink

  • 3 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    what a awesome imagination.
    Well done, very creatively written .

  • 3 years ago

    by Mihir Deshmukh

    Wow like it's a stunner. Great job!

  • 3 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Judging comment:

    This piece is amazing. It blows the reader away with it's simplicity yet it is not so simple that it bores the reader. There is a sense of imagery in this piece that so many people seem to forget. There is a voice to this write that just jumps off the page and creates a wonderful sense of character. So much can be said about something so fantastically unique while still being so completely universal (each reader can take it in a way that is personal to them without losing the authors "true" or intended meaning.)