Comments : Broken

  • 9 years ago

    by John Doe

    Yes it so happens that in aa race to be successful, or to win a battle the one's we love the most are the one's who break us to pieces. The audacity of depicting an ultimate truth is rarely shown like in this one.great poem!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Spectacle of Serenity

    I can feel your pain! Great poem!