Comments : The Seductive Voice

  • 2 years ago

    by The Fairy Mary Poppins

    It's very long if it's not separated in stanzas which is the only thing I really love in a poem, I don't want just a story. I want a story I can read a story that dresses itself in poetry and I think that's what lacked in my eyes, besides that it was very nice. 5/5

    -Mori

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Excellent write.