Comments : Long way.

  • 3 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Nicely written.

  • 3 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    "I can't feel what I don't"

    - this line really stood out to me at the start, and is the line I went back to as soon as I finished reading. I think this is so true, we can only feel what we feel, and I think life is about learning how to help yourself feel certain things, and surrounding yourself with as much things as possible that you know can make you feel this way.

    The verse of patience is also quite relevant and I agree completely with what you say about waiting, and how love will come at the right time. Beautifully worded.

    The rest of the poem is great and very honest, which I admire. I realte to this a lot, it shows a lot of insecure thoughts about the future, about trust and love, and trusting love. It speaks of change in a relationship and not wanting the good things to end, so you would rather just appreciate what is, as it is in the present moment. Then just see where it lands.

    Loved this write!!

  • 3 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Pleasing piece. I love it.