Comments : Dead Child

  • 8 years ago

    by Shruti

    That's sad; but wonderful.
    "A boatman signs at
    distance"
    ^this line is really nice.
    A good start.
    I love it.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is a beautiful and sad little piece that thoroughly moved me.

    "May these ripples be your friends"
    ^^^^^^^^

    Excellent wording. A really delicate and moving write; well done and all the best,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Skyler

    "Loud and deep, his voice, Far and deep, this river"

    This paints a scene very effectively. While it's evident that English is not your first language, you command its use to beautiful effect.

  • 8 years ago

    by Sushmita Mitra Chetri

    Really very connecting and appealing...

  • 7 years ago

    by Khadz

    Some time can not be replace by, stay with us in memories its show's delicate love and pure love...