Comments : Life

  • 3 years ago

    by Cindy

    it has been a long time since I have got to read any poetry. I really enjoyed this.

    This universe called life,
    is a vast ocean in which
    we survive;

    Seems like no matter what life throws our way we find a reason to fight to survive. Very intense feelings coming from your words.

    lessons are earned and
    we return it to spread
    its words...
    just like a speck of dust
    we kick from our feet
    returns to earth
    the place of its birth;

    There are so many life lessons to matter how old we get we are still learning.

    Rejoicing the pleasure
    of giving what we reap
    like tiny dew drops falling
    off a leaf.

    This stanza really touched my heart....we seem to be giving something to someone all our life.

    Great job!
    Love Cindy

  • 3 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Cindy so good to see a comment from you after a long time .This poem was improvised by Meena.
    Credit goes to her .

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a lovely write with a wonderful last stanza. Excellent and all the very best,

  • 1 year ago

    by Augustus Black

    Great poem.

  • 1 year ago

    by Lucifer

    To be honest, you could have written a little more. I mean there should be one more stanza just like the middle one. But still it's indeed a good write. Especially the ending you have given to it. I just love the ending.