by Cindy
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            Alka   | 
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            Cindy so good to see a comment from you after a long time .This poem was improvised by Meena.  | 
by Ben Pickard
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            What a lovely write with a wonderful last stanza. Excellent and all the very best,  | 
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 Great poem.  | 
by Lucifer
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 To be honest, you could have written a little more. I mean there should be one more stanza just like the middle one. But still it's indeed a good write. Especially the ending you have given to it. I just love the ending.  |