Comments : 5.30PM

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A heart breaking and thoroughly well written and clever piece, Jenni. Well done and take care,

  • 2 years ago

    by Britt

    My heart aches for the grief I feel with every word. Praying you're able to get through this hard time. They say time makes grief easier, but as someone who has grieved, I don't agree. <3 Loves to you.

  • 2 years ago

    by Koan

    Deeply touching write.. It made remember when I got the mail hat my Father past away ~deep sigh~

  • 1 year ago


    Your poem is so sad Jenni, but reflects what many of us go through when our nearest and dearest move onto the next world and life.
    My sister died of cancer, and like you perhaps, I was there at her bedside as she passed over.
    I'm certain that they do hear us and our thoughts at such difficult times, and your poem beautifully reflects the emotions that one feels at these sad times.
    Well penned Jenni, a great piece of work!