I really cant understand why this lovely poem has no comments..
I had to comment on this poem.
You poured out such heart and raw emotion within this poem that it made me cry.
Your rhyming is beautiful... It's poems like these that make me smile, not for the sadness within the message but because you as the writer was able to release and let the feelings flow, and on top of that you added a wonderful rhyme scheme that flowed so well... just a really nice poem!
1 year ago
by Ben Pickard
Everything Maple says. A lovely little piece of poetry.
All the best,
This is so beautiful. It gave me Goose bumps. It's emotional, truthful and so raw.
Yes, when we are broken it's hard to pick ourselves back up but we need to because it's what will help is move on, learn to love again etc. We need to learn from past mistakes instead of dwell on them.