Comments : Damaged

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    this is another poem that is concisely written, every word perfectly placed.

    From reading this poem I believe it speaks of commitment, or at least the, 'lets throw caution to the wind and do it' It speaks of pain and previous suffering and the need for this to be put right with a healthier experience.

    Throwing stars up into the sky symbolises for me anyway fate.

    Suffering is endless, & (good eh?) has no cure for suffering. This is a great way to view this human affliction. Why seek perfection, happiness when it never lasts. Except the here and the now and find harmony in the self. Why do we fear connection? If releasing this fear allows to live freely, surely there is a walkable path ahead.

    This poem is truly enlightening.

    Take care,

    Michael