What a beautiful collaboration by two Red Hot Rhymers!

Well done!!

All the best,
Ingrid

A real pleasure working with a rhyming master - thanks Peter!

Nice job on this collaboration. It flowed beautifully.
Take care Cindy

Hello guys,

I cannot think of two better gents that you guys. Your writing styles have blended in such a way that I would describe as delicious. So if you don't mind I am going to taste your seminal poetry now...

Oh, *slurps* this is divine, the metric beat the sing song quality is making goose bump all over. The rhyme that all good love poetry should have is exquisite. I am full, but I want more...

For I, my darling, love you
'Till the very end of time,
I breathe each waking moment
In the hope that you'll be mine.
^
Yes, god damn you man, I will be yours. I mean you only had to ask!

So take the rose I pick for you
And run with me through streams;
Dispel the nightmares plaguing you
And ever share my dreams.
^
But, what about my dress, it is dry clean only? Still, the rose is pretty and you could carry me if you like *looks up at you and smiles sweetly*

I am late for work, gotta go.

Well done both of you.

Take care,

Michael

Came back to reread this piece. Really is a beautiful collab...I can tell who wrote which stanza....lol..only because I know one of the writers style so well.
Excellent job both of you :)
Take care
Cindy

Flawless guys

Wow...who would dare say no to this? An excellent piece from two masters of romance, maybe? I have melted in between the lines. Superb!