Comments : The Essence of Love (collaboration with Ben Pickard)

  • 2 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    What a beautiful collaboration by two Red Hot Rhymers!

    Well done!!

    All the best,

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A real pleasure working with a rhyming master - thanks Peter!

  • 2 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nice job on this collaboration. It flowed beautifully.
    Take care Cindy

  • 2 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello guys,

    I cannot think of two better gents that you guys. Your writing styles have blended in such a way that I would describe as delicious. So if you don't mind I am going to taste your seminal poetry now...

    Oh, *slurps* this is divine, the metric beat the sing song quality is making goose bump all over. The rhyme that all good love poetry should have is exquisite. I am full, but I want more...

    For I, my darling, love you
    'Till the very end of time,
    I breathe each waking moment
    In the hope that you'll be mine.
    Yes, god damn you man, I will be yours. I mean you only had to ask!

    So take the rose I pick for you
    And run with me through streams;
    Dispel the nightmares plaguing you
    And ever share my dreams.
    But, what about my dress, it is dry clean only? Still, the rose is pretty and you could carry me if you like *looks up at you and smiles sweetly*

    I am late for work, gotta go.

    Well done both of you.

    Take care,


  • 2 years ago

    by Cindy

    Came back to reread this piece. Really is a beautiful collab...I can tell who wrote which because I know one of the writers style so well.
    Excellent job both of you :)
    Take care

  • 2 years ago

    by Em

    Flawless guys

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow...who would dare say no to this? An excellent piece from two masters of romance, maybe? I have melted in between the lines. Superb!