Comments : The Essence of Love (collaboration with Ben Pickard)

  • 1 year ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    What a beautiful collaboration by two Red Hot Rhymers!

    Well done!!

    All the best,
    Ingrid

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A real pleasure working with a rhyming master - thanks Peter!

  • 1 year ago

    by Cindy

    Nice job on this collaboration. It flowed beautifully.
    Take care Cindy

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello guys,

    I cannot think of two better gents that you guys. Your writing styles have blended in such a way that I would describe as delicious. So if you don't mind I am going to taste your seminal poetry now...

    Oh, *slurps* this is divine, the metric beat the sing song quality is making goose bump all over. The rhyme that all good love poetry should have is exquisite. I am full, but I want more...

    For I, my darling, love you
    'Till the very end of time,
    I breathe each waking moment
    In the hope that you'll be mine.
    ^
    Yes, god damn you man, I will be yours. I mean you only had to ask!

    So take the rose I pick for you
    And run with me through streams;
    Dispel the nightmares plaguing you
    And ever share my dreams.
    ^
    But, what about my dress, it is dry clean only? Still, the rose is pretty and you could carry me if you like *looks up at you and smiles sweetly*

    I am late for work, gotta go.

    Well done both of you.

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 1 year ago

    by Cindy

    Came back to reread this piece. Really is a beautiful collab...I can tell who wrote which stanza....lol..only because I know one of the writers style so well.
    Excellent job both of you :)
    Take care
    Cindy

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Flawless guys

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow...who would dare say no to this? An excellent piece from two masters of romance, maybe? I have melted in between the lines. Superb!