Hello Haleyy and welcome to pnq

This really is a sad piece but it is well written and has a nice flow to it. It deals with a feeling that many can relate to as well, which is always a great start for any sort of literature!
All the very best ad keep writing,
Ben

This is written very fantastically. This kind of sad poem creates great value. The stream and the wording here is quite good actually.

Keep on showing your skills. 5/5