This is great. I love how you take a reasonably benign target (the sky), lull the reader with the idea of him turning it from blue to grey.....but then, thwack! He didn't just change the sky's colour - it was people too who he changed and made different from each other; suddenly the sky being grey seems irrelevant!
Havoc indeed.......

Darren, I think I mentioned previously, but I have to respectfully disagree with you about the quality of these deteriorating - I am enjoying them more and more!

All the best,
Ben