There's is just something about your poetry that draws me in and makes me read it over and over and..while I do see grammatical errors for some reason the charm of your words makes me overlook the minor flaws.. I'm nominating this because I feel it has potential...just read it again yourself and try to edit it...not a lot (it doesn't need it) just 'slightly' :)
This poem was unique and very deep. It holds a rhythmic flow to it and stands out above the rest. I was in awe with your wording. I really like the pattern of rhyme words, scattered throughout... its a very creative and heartfelt poem.