Comments : Stale

  • 2 years ago

    by Hellon

    There's is just something about your poetry that draws me in and makes me read it over and over and..while I do see grammatical errors for some reason the charm of your words makes me overlook the minor flaws.. I'm nominating this because I feel it has potential...just read it again yourself and try to edit it...not a lot (it doesn't need it) just 'slightly' :)

    • 2 years ago

      by Maher

      Your comments always make my day. Your compliments are meant for someone way above me. Thanks for liking my work and I'll edit it ASAP :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This caught my attention and I had to read it a few times myself.Excellent written and I hope you win this one.Add to my favorite. All the best.

    • 2 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Hellon

    Oh this reads much better now. Just a little tweak here and there has made the flow a lot better...hope you agree?

    • 2 years ago

      by Maher

      Definitely! Thanks for pointing it out Hellon. It's hard to notice these things unless you have someone there to check it for you :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Maher - well done on the win for this wonderful piece.
    All the very best,
    Ben

    • 2 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you sir. Very much appreciated :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging comment

    This poem was unique and very deep. It holds a rhythmic flow to it and stands out above the rest. I was in awe with your wording. I really like the pattern of rhyme words, scattered throughout... its a very creative and heartfelt poem.

    • 1 year ago

      by Maher

      Thank you ma'am and many thanks for taking the time to enjoy it :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Such a unique and sincere piece

    • 1 year ago

      by Maher

      Many thanks :)

    • 1 year ago

      by Maher

      And thank you for taking the time to read some of my others :)