There's is just something about your poetry that draws me in and makes me read it over and over and..while I do see grammatical errors for some reason the charm of your words makes me overlook the minor flaws.. I'm nominating this because I feel it has potential...just read it again yourself and try to edit it...not a lot (it doesn't need it) just 'slightly' :)

This caught my attention and I had to read it a few times myself.Excellent written and I hope you win this one.Add to my favorite. All the best.

Oh this reads much better now. Just a little tweak here and there has made the flow a lot better...hope you agree?

Maher - well done on the win for this wonderful piece.
All the very best,
Ben

Judging comment

This poem was unique and very deep. It holds a rhythmic flow to it and stands out above the rest. I was in awe with your wording. I really like the pattern of rhyme words, scattered throughout... its a very creative and heartfelt poem.

Such a unique and sincere piece