Comments : Winter Tombs

  • 2 years ago

    by Maher

    Cold, dark and musty. I like it. For so little words, the imagery they create is intense. Again, I like it :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a beautifully crafted and descriptive little piece you have written here, Rania. A really tight and rhythmic poem.
    All the very best and I hope you are well,

  • 2 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Beautiful written.

  • 2 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Ms Sunshine wrote a captivating poem this week.

    I really like that she placed it within the misc. category. My reasons is, nature (Winter) is the hidden message throughout.. but Her key word of Tombs.. sheds a dark and sorrowful feel to it. Very elegant!

    Winter can be depressing, making one feel loneliness and even death. A dying tree withers, that is a visual that spoke to me within this poem! Wonderful write!!