Michael.

As sad as this is, it is beautifully written and tinged with a lovely dose of hope towards the end. I love your use of alliteration in this and "Serengeti tears" is a wonderful way to draw the reader in.

A wonderful write and all the best,
Ben

A beautiful write. When sadness overcomes us and we feel all alone and forgotten there is always hope. Nothing will last forever. With each rain there comes sunshine.