Comments : Sadness (Acrostic)

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard


    As sad as this is, it is beautifully written and tinged with a lovely dose of hope towards the end. I love your use of alliteration in this and "Serengeti tears" is a wonderful way to draw the reader in.

    A wonderful write and all the best,

  • 2 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    A beautiful write. When sadness overcomes us and we feel all alone and forgotten there is always hope. Nothing will last forever. With each rain there comes sunshine.